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Howdy my friends. I hope you all had a peaceful and relaxing Christmas holiday. I am needing your assistance. My next class, is in electronic media and have been using a terrific multimedia program. I wrote a script for a program for "Cognitive Conditioning." I only have 4 minutes and 45 seconds to make an educational presentation. I would kindly ask you take a look and give me your toughest feedback! I am not looking for compliments, only constructive feedback....
Here is the link
<A HREF="http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=1063176&t=1800" TARGET=_blank>http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PI ... &t=1800</A>

Thanks!

Am I correct that this was a video for a part two? Just wanted to make sure I viewed the correct one. If so...I think it is great. Obviously something we've all done through the program. My only issue with it is the music in the background. I'm not sure if you can make it softer, but the volume it is as now is distracting...taking away from your presentation. Maybe just having it in the first slide then fading it out or something might work better. Just my 2 cents

Yes I need to format part one - Yes I thought the music was a little too loud - but I was jamming! Thanks for the honest feedback!!!

Well I didn't mean to stomp on your jammin' session hahaha